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Treading light along the way
Brothers in arms we have come
The war above consumes all
Peace, this is what we strive for

The shadow of our intent
Consuming all we worked for
Brothers we must all submit
Peace, is just out of our reach

This tangled wreck hold us all
Peace, you must be made to know
Is all that people fight for
Brothers, yes indeed, we fight

Brothers, you all must Arise.
Brothers, our prize awaits us
Brothers, peace everlasting
Peace, searching, but never found
©2008-2009 ~the-catfish
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Okay so...I decided to write something. I was bored and while haloing thought "Hmmm so the gravemind Heptameters.....I shall give it a shot." And it seems nice. An awkward feel to the rhythm yet it flows.
Enjoy.

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Interesting piece, I can't quite follow the rhythm, as you've mentioned already it is a little disjointed.

Still it alludes to the brothers in arms sentiment well so nice work :)

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In the quiet of the world my thoughts do roam, for it's there in the quiet that they feel at home...

- Me

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